celluloid

as i lie awake, at twilight
in the tv’s after glow
past strung out
like photographs
light flickering,, just so…
silent movies
brought to life
on my minds silver screen
immortalized celluloid memories
things that may
or may not have been…
accuracy no longer matters
as it all plays out
in black and white
our love affair
edited to perfection
as i lie awake, at twilight

by: paisley

Rating 3.00 out of 5

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4 Responses to celluloid

  1. shakir hasnain May 12, 2008 at 12:30 am #

    Beautifully written paisley. it made me look away.

  2. tom May 12, 2008 at 12:12 pm #

    paisley, don’t you just hate it when you just lie there awake when you really rather be asleep?

  3. kunjubi May 15, 2008 at 6:48 pm #

    our love affair
    edited to perfection
    as i lie awake, at twilight……..If it was perfect, you should never have written it this way..Nothing is perfect in this world, not even God… kunjubi

  4. twilight series May 27, 2009 at 5:05 am #

    Pretty cool written paisley. I like it

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