Comments for Your Poems. Your Stories.

Comment on Lost in thought by paisley

paisley — Thu, 03 Jul 2008 18:49:21 +0000

beautiful verse tom,, but i so do not need to be reminded of how fast we get so old!!!!

Comment on Dancing with a dream by Anna_of_Poems

Anna_of_Poems — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 15:30:36 +0000

Tom I wanted to comment earlier but the blog genie was making trouble …

I really liked this poem. It almost made me cry though. It gives me a lot of chills. Sometimes I wonder how it would be for me if my husband would go before me and there I would be alone and waiting … it’s a scary thought. I think you are doing a great job though, still staying active and writing poetry and interacting with people.

And also your poem makes me think of how important it is to make life the best while we are still young, and have the most fun possible and not let hardships or troubles stop that. I would never want to look back 40 years from now and feel that I wasted time I had together with my husband while I had the chance. This is an inspiration to me.

Comment on Lean Into Me by Anna_of_Poems

Anna_of_Poems — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 15:20:20 +0000

Like I said earlier, I really love the last two lines of this.

Comment on Hallow Heart by Anna_of_Poems

Anna_of_Poems — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 15:18:19 +0000

Holly you posted! That is so great! Welcome to our blog. I am sure you are really busy with that E-Book and it’s great that you made time to post here!

Comment on Conservation…. by Tom

Tom — Tue, 01 Jul 2008 15:13:21 +0000

Such deep thoughts. Wonderfully expressed. The true meaning of recycling.

Comment on Conservation…. by paisley

paisley — Sat, 28 Jun 2008 18:27:05 +0000

the whole piece is exquisite,, but i must say the line that held out the most meaning for me was this one:

Nothing can be severed from anything eternally.

Comment on The Sweetest Guy by Tom

Tom — Sat, 28 Jun 2008 12:18:22 +0000

Very sweet, tender and lovingly written. I enjoyed the sentiment. But be very careful with your heart.

Comment on went away by paisley

paisley — Thu, 26 Jun 2008 13:07:23 +0000

temporary addiction moving
from one thing to the next..

this whole piece sounds as if you have written it about me…

Comment on touch you by paisley

paisley — Thu, 26 Jun 2008 13:00:23 +0000

i am left with such a sense of urgency when i read this… good write jan…..

Comment on Please Look A Little Deeper by paisley

paisley — Tue, 24 Jun 2008 11:54:19 +0000

such yearning.. i really felt the emotion in this piece.. well done….