Comments for Your Poems, Your Stories http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories Tell the World Thu, 04 Feb 2010 20:56:36 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 Comment on Mysterious Rose by Heart 4 poetry http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/mysterious-rose/comment-page-1/#comment-7184 Heart 4 poetry Thu, 04 Feb 2010 20:56:36 +0000 http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/?p=1243#comment-7184 Very good poem. It painted a beautiful image for the reader to imagine. Very Good Job. Well done! -Heart 4 Poetry Very good poem. It painted a beautiful image for the reader to imagine. Very Good Job. Well done!
-Heart 4 Poetry

]]> Comment on Messed up Poetry by Heart 4 poetry http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/messed-up-poetry/comment-page-1/#comment-7183 Heart 4 poetry Thu, 04 Feb 2010 20:53:28 +0000 http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/messed-up-poetry/#comment-7183 Thank you very much! I wrote this poem last year because I was sitting at school and had nothing to do with the last ten minutes class. I wanted to write something. Anything that would bring a little life to the class instead of sitting there, tapping pencils, and frowning at the floor. I wrote the poem and passed it to a friend. She ended up passing it around and everyone, even the teacher, were all smiling. Thank you so much for your comment. Thank you very much! I wrote this poem last year because I was sitting at school and had nothing to do with the last ten minutes class. I wanted to write something. Anything that would bring a little life to the class instead of sitting there, tapping pencils, and frowning at the floor. I wrote the poem and passed it to a friend. She ended up passing it around and everyone, even the teacher, were all smiling. Thank you so much for your comment.

]]> Comment on Tomorrow I Will… by Jackie Kuncl http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/tomorrow-i-will/comment-page-1/#comment-7181 Jackie Kuncl Wed, 03 Feb 2010 15:11:52 +0000 http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/?p=1229#comment-7181 Wow I enjoyed this poem, tomorrow really is a way to start over. One never knows what tomorrow will hold for them, it could be a brand new start to the rest of their life. However the end of your poem you let tomorrow pass without any change, and I believe that this is the main issue with a lot of people. They think that its just another day without realizing it could change the rest of their life. Wow I enjoyed this poem, tomorrow really is a way to start over. One never knows what tomorrow will hold for them, it could be a brand new start to the rest of their life.

However the end of your poem you let tomorrow pass without any change, and I believe that this is the main issue with a lot of people. They think that its just another day without realizing it could change the rest of their life.

]]> Comment on Messed up Poetry by Jackie Kuncl http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/messed-up-poetry/comment-page-1/#comment-7180 Jackie Kuncl Wed, 03 Feb 2010 14:56:48 +0000 http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/messed-up-poetry/#comment-7180 This poem was interesting, it was sort of everything opposite, which makes them catch the interest in your poem. I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed reading your note about the poem, and I do believe that it provides a quick smile to anyone in need of one. This poem was interesting, it was sort of everything opposite, which makes them catch the interest in your poem. I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed reading your note about the poem, and I do believe that it provides a quick smile to anyone in need of one.

]]> Comment on If Women rule the world by Heart 4 poetry http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/if-women-rule-the-world/comment-page-1/#comment-7178 Heart 4 poetry Tue, 02 Feb 2010 19:09:13 +0000 http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/if-women-rule-the-world/#comment-7178 I love this one.... very good...if only it were true! :) I love this one…. very good…if only it were true! :)

]]> Comment on Spread your wings by Heart 4 poetry http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/spread-your-wings/comment-page-1/#comment-7177 Heart 4 poetry Tue, 02 Feb 2010 19:08:11 +0000 http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/?p=1205#comment-7177 Very good poem. I love the imagery you have created. It made me think of painting a picture or actually feeling what was going on. Great work of art you have here. Good Job and keep up the amazing work! Very good poem. I love the imagery you have created. It made me think of painting a picture or actually feeling what was going on. Great work of art you have here. Good Job and keep up the amazing work!

]]> Comment on My Guardian Angel by Heart 4 poetry http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/my-guardian-angel/comment-page-1/#comment-7176 Heart 4 poetry Tue, 02 Feb 2010 18:16:43 +0000 http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/?p=346#comment-7176 Very good poem here, my friend. I liked it very much. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Good Job! Very good poem here, my friend. I liked it very much. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Good Job!

]]> Comment on All this and Heaven too by Heart 4 poetry http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/all-this-and-heaven-too/comment-page-1/#comment-7159 Heart 4 poetry Wed, 20 Jan 2010 16:23:01 +0000 http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/?p=1189#comment-7159 Yes! So very true. You know, Most people don't beleive that this really happened but take a look around, We DID NOT in no possible way evolve on our own. So many times we have gotten into trouble and God has bailed us out. When Adam and Eve tasted the fruit of the forbidden tree, God Banned them from the garden of Eden and punished them with death. This goes to show that We Humans are too clumsy and hard-headed to not have a Great God to get us through it all. Hang in there, my friend. Wait for the prize. Stay with God and I promise to you with all my heart, it will be worth it all.! God Bless you! -Miranda (Heart 4 Poetry) Yes! So very true. You know, Most people don’t beleive that this really happened but take a look around, We DID NOT in no possible way evolve on our own. So many times we have gotten into trouble and God has bailed us out. When Adam and Eve tasted the fruit of the forbidden tree, God Banned them from the garden of Eden and punished them with death. This goes to show that We Humans are too clumsy and hard-headed to not have a Great God to get us through it all. Hang in there, my friend. Wait for the prize. Stay with God and I promise to you with all my heart, it will be worth it all.!
God Bless you!

-Miranda (Heart 4 Poetry)

]]> Comment on Falling in the fire by Heart 4 poetry http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/falling-in-the-fire/comment-page-1/#comment-7158 Heart 4 poetry Wed, 20 Jan 2010 16:11:57 +0000 http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/falling-in-the-fire/#comment-7158 Thank your for you wonderful comments. I wrote this two years ago in the seventh grade as I was thinking about how difficult the teenage years seem. I noticed that most teens are already into drugs and illegal activities and how they explained that the more they convince themselves that it is okay, the easier it is to do the things they were. Some of these teens have been sent off the foster homes and Juvenile Hall. This poem is a representation of how easy it can be to get caught up in the sin of the world and how hard it is to get out. Again, thank you for your great comments. They are much appreciated. God Bless you! -Miranda Patterson (Heart 4 Poetry) Thank your for you wonderful comments. I wrote this two years ago in the seventh grade as I was thinking about how difficult the teenage years seem. I noticed that most teens are already into drugs and illegal activities and how they explained that the more they convince themselves that it is okay, the easier it is to do the things they were. Some of these teens have been sent off the foster homes and Juvenile Hall. This poem is a representation of how easy it can be to get caught up in the sin of the world and how hard it is to get out. Again, thank you for your great comments. They are much appreciated.
God Bless you!

-Miranda Patterson (Heart 4 Poetry)

]]> Comment on Will You Still Feel The Same by Janaya J http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/will-you-still-feel-the-same/comment-page-1/#comment-7151 Janaya J Thu, 14 Jan 2010 21:02:30 +0000 http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/?p=1090#comment-7151 "Are the feelings we share strong enough to survive Survive distance and time Knowing that forever our souls are intertwined Never stop feeling or caring Always sharing I sit and wonder is it still the same If I close my eyes and whisper your name Will you hear me and still feel the same" I'am going through a sitaution in my life now that is similar to this verse. To understand your deep feeling made me appreciate it so much more. I love how expressive your feelings are. I enjoyed it. “Are the feelings we share strong enough to survive
Survive distance and time
Knowing that forever our souls are intertwined
Never stop feeling or caring
Always sharing
I sit and wonder is it still the same
If I close my eyes and whisper your name
Will you hear me and still feel the same”

I’am going through a sitaution in my life now that is similar to this verse. To understand your deep feeling made me appreciate it so much more. I love how expressive your feelings are. I enjoyed it.

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