Dancing with a dream

As you fell into my arms

A perfect fit

The feeling, felt so right

We gazed into each others eyes

We knew it

As we grasped each other

And held so tight.

The pounding of our hearts

Beating to the melody

Of Sinatra crooning

“I’ll never smile again.”

The smile was there

For fifty six years

Suddenly the music stopped,

You left

Called home.

Now

I’m all alone.

Awaiting my call

Beaconing me home.

Tom Fenning

6/16/2008

Rating 4.00 out of 5

About tom

87 widowed since 2000. Write poems to save my sanity 5 children 16 grandchildren 23 great grandchildren and 3 coming Volunteer at 3 Local Elementary schools as teachers helper

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4 Responses to Dancing with a dream

  1. David Pekrul June 16, 2008 at 9:24 pm #

    This is a sad, yet beautiful piece. One can be alone, yet not lonely. I hope this is the way with you; better yet, to have family around giving support.

  2. Tom June 17, 2008 at 12:10 am #

    David, the five beautiful children that Merry left me are my salvation.

  3. jorc709 June 17, 2008 at 2:00 pm #

    eternal love

  4. Anna_of_Poems July 2, 2008 at 3:30 pm #

    Tom I wanted to comment earlier but the blog genie was making trouble …

    I really liked this poem. It almost made me cry though. It gives me a lot of chills. Sometimes I wonder how it would be for me if my husband would go before me and there I would be alone and waiting … it’s a scary thought. I think you are doing a great job though, still staying active and writing poetry and interacting with people.

    And also your poem makes me think of how important it is to make life the best while we are still young, and have the most fun possible and not let hardships or troubles stop that. I would never want to look back 40 years from now and feel that I wasted time I had together with my husband while I had the chance. This is an inspiration to me.

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