empty

some days are empty
no words will come
rain hides the tears
falling for you
a heart
out of control
chaos
knowing i shouldnโ€™t
be thinking of you
knowing i canโ€™t
stop

by:jorc709.wordpress.com

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3 Responses to empty

  1. Anna_of_Poems May 6, 2008 at 1:02 pm #

    I liked this poem very much. I think we have all been there. Very powerful, very simple. Well-created.

  2. jorc709 May 6, 2008 at 3:01 pm #

    thank you… i’m new to sharing..

  3. paisley May 6, 2008 at 5:07 pm #

    that feeling ,, that helplessness,, that is something we can all relate to,, and you brought it home so nicely here..

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