Comments on: Friends

By: Andrea

Andrea — Mon, 08 Sep 2008 02:52:49 +0000

Yahh……..your poem is true,, there are only few friends that remain faithful to you when you are falling apart .Thank you for the message that we must tresure oue friends…….Keep on inspiring us….Gudluck to your carrier

By: Anna_of_Poems

Anna_of_Poems — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 21:41:25 +0000

Thanks for joining the blog, angel. I think your poem has a very good message and it is very true. That’s a really good quality to have and one of the most important. Keep writing, write and write, drill your style and rhythm, and your poetry will get really good.

By: angel

angel — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 21:20:47 +0000

I appreciate your comment and assure you that am working on making myself better at this,soon to be a part of Temple University’s Alumni and am confident that i will get better at it. Thank you

By: David Pekrul

David Pekrul — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 20:23:03 +0000

This has a very good message. The writing is also good, but I would suggest writing it in either present tense or past tense, but not both. It would look more professional if you chose one way or the other.