Comments on: I’m Five Years Old

By: tom

tom — Sun, 18 May 2008 03:34:34 +0000

David, great stuff. I recognize the kid’s way of speech from my many grand kids.
Nice writing.

paisley — Sat, 17 May 2008 18:56:14 +0000

i love it!!! the way the thought pattern continues to change… perfection!!!!!!!

Anna_of_Poems — Sat, 17 May 2008 16:12:21 +0000

Ha ha! That is very perfect! I remember when I talked that way, too!

Such an accurate rendition of the train of thought and speech of a child.

And the grown-up is standing there going “uh huh … uh huh …”