Messed up Poetry

The dark is too bright
and I’m falling awake.
My pencil won’t write
and this paper is fake.
This cactus is soft
and my fur coat is rough.
I love doing homework
and can’t get enough.
I hate to win
and love to lose.
I hate exciting games
and love boring news.
Spiders are my friends,
butterflies, my foes.
I know it all sounds strange,
but that is how it goes.

Authors note:

This is just a little bit of imagination and creativity to give you a quick smile for your day. A smile is a good medicine that you should take daily in order to go about your day feeling refreshed and ready for anything. You can find out more in my next peice ” Recipe for a Smile”

Rating 3.00 out of 5

About Heart 4 poetry

I love writing. It has been my passion for years. I started writing when I was only eight. I had my first poem published at ten through a poetry contest. Poetry is a major part of my life. I can write my life down in a simple page of poetry. I have not yet been recognized for my writing talent, but I hope to publish many poems and books in the near future.( I am now fifteen and still writing)

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2 Responses to Messed up Poetry

  1. Jackie Kuncl February 3, 2010 at 7:56 am #

    This poem was interesting, it was sort of everything opposite, which makes them catch the interest in your poem. I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed reading your note about the poem, and I do believe that it provides a quick smile to anyone in need of one.

  2. Heart 4 poetry February 4, 2010 at 1:53 pm #

    Thank you very much! I wrote this poem last year because I was sitting at school and had nothing to do with the last ten minutes class. I wanted to write something. Anything that would bring a little life to the class instead of sitting there, tapping pencils, and frowning at the floor. I wrote the poem and passed it to a friend. She ended up passing it around and everyone, even the teacher, were all smiling. Thank you so much for your comment.

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