Comments on: STARDOM ISOLATED http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/stardom-isolated/ Tell the World Thu, 04 Feb 2010 20:56:36 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Anna_of_Poems http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/stardom-isolated/comment-page-1/#comment-6976 Anna_of_Poems Thu, 16 Jul 2009 01:38:23 +0000 http://poempoempoem.com/poemsandstories/?p=930#comment-6976 You have some great lines in here. I should add that the poem would be a lot more effective and easier to read without the all-caps. These are examples of some very good lines (in my opinion): "THE DAY YOU DIE,YOU ARE JUST BORN YOU CAN BE KILLED,YOUR SPIRIT CAN’T BE TORN" "YOU WILL LEAVE YOUR CLONE AT THE DARKEST NOON" You have some great lines in here. I should add that the poem would be a lot more effective and easier to read without the all-caps.

These are examples of some very good lines (in my opinion):

“THE DAY YOU DIE,YOU ARE JUST BORN
YOU CAN BE KILLED,YOUR SPIRIT CAN’T BE TORN”

“YOU WILL LEAVE YOUR CLONE AT THE DARKEST NOON”

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